Wednesday, May 30, 2012

I'm Out...

So, I moved my blog a few months ago, and now I'm moving... our family.

To that end, I will be out of commission and offline for probably a week.

Going from a one-bedroom to a three-bedroom should be a piece of cake, right? Except that there's really not enough room in our one-bedroom apartment to stack all the boxes that need to go.

We get the keys today, and start moving stuff over tonight.

Thank goodness.

So, next week I should be back with lots of fun thoughts on writing and reading and everything awesome.

Don't have too much fun without me!

-DC

Tuesday, May 29, 2012

Awards!

I was recently given an award by Jenny over at Jenny's Imaginary World, called:
The Beautiful Blogger Award
How she knows I'm beautiful when my picture isn't that great a shot of my face is beyond me... well played Jenny, well played.

: : EDIT : :

I have just been informed that I received the:


From Tracey Joseph: Young adult and Middle Grade Writer. I feel so happy! *cue dramatic tears*

Since I'm so awesome, I will be combining the two sets of rules and making up my own thing. Because I can do that.

Combined rules are as follows...


1. Thank the blogger(s) who nominated you. (THANKS JENNY and TRACEY!!!)
2. Answer the ten questions provided... (will do...)
3. Share 7 random things about yourself. (...we'll get to that)
4. Nominate 7 fellow bloggers for the Beautiful Blogger and Kreative Blogger award. (...also below)

Numero Dos: the ten questions...

1. Fave song or singer? Tough... I'll say "Beautiful" by Jim Brickman, featuring Wayne Brady. It's "our song" :-)
2. Fave dessert? Cheesecake... Zoe Anne's Cheesecake, to be specific. If you're ever in or around Hillsboro or Beaverton, Oregon, you've GOT to try it. Plus Zoe herself is hilarious and awesome.
3. What ticks you off? Dishonesty, and rudeness.
4. What do you do when upset? I shut down and close everyone out, then I start crying. Once the tears come the worst is over.
5. Favorite pet? I had pet rats for a while... it was fun :-)
6. Black or white? That depends... are we talking clothing, or chocolate? Either way, I can say black for both.
7. Biggest fear? Isolation.
8. What's your attitude? Happy. As often as possible ;-)
9. What is perfection? Being grateful for things as they are.
10. What is your guilty pleasure? The internet. Love it, hate it.

Numero Tres: seven things about myself.

1. I love Bryer's Mrs. Field's Cookie Dough Blast ice cream. Best. Ever.
2. I've always wanted to like olives, but I can't. I've tried. They disgust me.
3. I am now 26 weeks pregnant!
4. In connection with #3, I am having trouble sleeping... plus we're moving on the 1st, and packing is making me dead tired.
5. My cousin gave me a TON of baby boy clothes, so I will never have to buy any ever again.
6. Same cousin gave me a wardrobe of maternity clothes. Now I feel cute-pregnant instead of fat-pregnant.
7. My two-year-old is testing his boundaries, and it's driving me up the wall.

Numero Cuatro: nominate seven other bloggers. I'm going to give them the option of choosing which award they want to accept. Or they can accept both! Because they are really all beautiful AND creative :-)

1. Lauren - Ink Stained Scribe (my awesome CP :-) )
2. Jessa Russo - My Writing Blog
3. Leigh Ann Kopans - Young Aduly Science Fiction Writer
4. Trina - Tidbits from Trina
5. Tiana - Tiana Smith
6. Tamara - Mad Ravings of a Feaky Snucker
7. Cupid - Cupid's Literary Connection
(who has permission to accept but not pass on this award because she's CRAZY busy with contests ALL the time)

(If you want to see the original rules for each award, they are: Beautiful and Kreative)

Well, there you have it! Short and sweet. Now go check out these ladies' blogs and give 'em a follow if you haven't already!

-DC

Monday, May 28, 2012

Review: The Book Thief

About a month ago, I started reading The Book Thief, by Markus Zusak.

I haven't finished it. I don't even think I'm halfway. I'm putting it down.

Here's the thing: I've been listening to it on audio book, and usually I can get through anything on audio. But for some reason, this just hasn't grabbed me. And I know that if I'm not interested in it on audio, I won't be in print either. That's just how I am.

If you look on the goodreads page, you'll see that others have raved about how wonderful and brilliant it is. To be frank, they're absolutely right. It's written flawlessly, with beautiful imagery and intriguing characters, in a setting that many of us are curious about (Nazi Germany, WWII). In fact, I recently read another book set in the same place, and loved it.

So why didn't I read it in a week like I do most other stories?

Honestly, I'm not sure. There are some things I could name that I didn't like, but none of them would usually keep me from finishing a book. (I won't say what they are, because I don't want to spoil it for you.) Whenever I think about going back to listen to it again, I think, "Ugh, I don't want to," like it's some kind of burden hanging over me. Then I find something else to do instead. Which, like I said, is weird. Consciously, I know it has so many great elements. 

I've learned a lot from it about creative description and tight writing, but still I have no desire to finish it. The characters, while interesting, don't pull me in. I don't feel for them. I can't imagine myself thinking what they think, and doing what they do. I don't really care about what's going on, I don't really care what happens to them. I don't care to find out the end. And I don't know exactly why.

***Later***
After going through more of the reviews on goodreads, I found people like me. They recognized The Book Thief for the beauty of the writing, and the ominous narration, but it didn't grab them. Things like "bland" and "easily forgettable" and "frustrating at times" really resonated with me. That's how I feel about it. It's great, but just not for me.

It kind of makes me sad. I wanted to like it...

Have you read this book? What did you think of it? Am I crazy?

Probably.

-DC

Saturday, May 26, 2012

...The Elusive Vlog...

First of all, I want to say a big HELLO and WELCOME to all my new followers! Over the last couple of weeks we've had some awesome people decide to follow along here, and I'm really excited to hear their thoughts in the comments, so thanks for being here, everyone!

Because a picture of a kid with chocolate on
his face is always cute, right? :-D
VLOG. It just sounds like something the crocodile hunter would go after to me. And by the way, if the V in vlog stands for 'video,' then what does the b in blog stand for?

Anyone?..... Bueler?......

Moving on.

In the aftermath of the Writers Voice Twitter Pitch craziness, some really cool writers thought it would be a grand idea to vlog about some random things. Some topics discussed were reasons not to vlog, why said reasons are lame excuses, what's cool about Twitter, random facts about self, and how querying is like karaokee.

I watched them ALL.

And now, because imitation is the finest form of flattery, I present for your enjoyment: my very. first. vlog.

: : EDIT : : The video I originally recorded wouldn't upload. SO I recorded straight to youtube and it worked out much nicer. HOWEVER... my hair is a mess, my makeup has worn off, and I didn't say as much in this video because of a certain Monkey.......

Either way, I hope you enjoy.




There you have it! Hope it was as entertaining as you expected it would be. I'd like to do more in the future, so we'll see what happens... now that I know how to do it, lol.

Happy weekend!

-DC

Friday, May 25, 2012

Giveaway Winner: RETURN

Alrighty people, today's the day! After a bit of a crazy week, I'm ready to pick a winner for our Britney Jensen Giveaway! The lucky person will receive either

1. A copy of RETURN, if they already own RISEN,

or

2. Both books if they don't have either!

I'm so excited for you all to read them, they're both such amazing stories!

If you missed my interview with Britney, go HERE to read about her experience writing and publishing RETURN.

Alrighty... I'm off to Random[.]org... winner will be chosen in the order the entries were received.









Aaaaaand the winner is....................... *drumroll*









True Random Number Generator  2Powered by RANDOM.ORG
TIANA SMITH!!!!
Congratulations, Tiana! I hope you'll favor us with a review once you've read the books, I love hearing your thoughts :-) Email me at darcicole[@]gmail[.]com with your address, and I'll have Britney sign and send your books!
The rest of you, head on over to RisenBook.com and order your copies of RISEN and RETURN today! And I totally forgot to mention that Britney is a GoodReads author! for those of you on GoodReads, you can follow her and become a fan HERE.
Thanks for playing everyone!!! I'm planning for another contest soon, so stay tuned!
-DC

Sunday, May 20, 2012

New Query: Repost!

I'm writing, I'm writing!
NOTE: This post is for:
1. My participation in the Query Roundtable happening May 22nd, hosted by the awesome Rachel Horwitz of You Are What You Write. (Check out the Roundtable Intro Post Here if you want to sign up for some help with your query!)
2. In case any awesome agents happen to swing by during the Writers Voice Twitter Pitch fest on May 24th, they'll be able to see RIGHT AWAY the amazing manuscript they're in for ;-)
Here we go!


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Title: THE SIGHT
Genre: YA High Fantasy
Word Count: 68,000




{Dearest Agent whom I worship so much,}

Three-hundred years after the Gods divided the land, they call on Kolina to overthrow a tyrannical king, reunite the kingdoms, and rule as High Queen.

When her possession of The Sight manifests, Kolina’s true identity is revealed as the only one who can perform these tasks. Having been shunned for years by her peers and fellow farmhands, she is terrified of failure and not sure she wants to try. In an act of blind and frustrated trust, she follows her grandfather out the gates of the farm to be trained in magic, combat, and cunning. Three Beasts, servants to the Gods themselves, will guide her along the way. In an effort to find a weakness in the false king’s defenses, Kolina discovers his advantage. He knows of her existence and is amassing an army to find and kill her - the rightful heir to the throne.

To fulfill her destiny and overthrow the usurper, Kolina must gather a prophesied group of people to help her, and believe in her calling. If she fails, the kingdoms will fall under a mad man’s fist. She’d better believe fast.

{Info}


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P.S.


Last week, I was reading through my MS, you know, just double checking for errors and such, when I came across a bit I forgotten about. I literally laughed out loud and had to have my husband read it too. I felt so proud :-)
Here's a snippet from Chapter Twenty-one of THE SIGHT. Enjoy :-)
“You wan’ them off?” Bo asked. He was pointing at the shackles around Gunnar’s ankles. 
Gunnar noticed for the first time that Bo’s were already off. 
“How’d you do that?” he asked. 
Bo scooted over to Gunnar’s feet. He held up the bracelet of twigs he’d made the day Kolina first learned how to use The Sight. “Like I said, I though’ I’d need ‘em.” 
Gunnar laughed. “How did you know?” 
One of the restraints fell away as Bo said, “Dunno. Someone once tol’ me I was klepto-voyant. Seems to be true, though i’ doesn’ show i’self  much lately.” 
Gunnar thought about the word, klepto-voyant. “Have you ever taken anything of mine?” 
The other shackle came loose and Bo said, “Oh, yeah. Once I took your belt on a whim, an’ the nex’ day I used i’ to prove my point on a bet in one o’ the towns we wen’ through. Won me some gold on tha’ one.” 
Gunnar’s jaw dropped. “I went belt-less for two days because of that! Where’s the gold? You owe me at least half.” 
Bo laughed. “I don’ owe you a single piece, boy. 'S no’ my fault your pants don’ fit.”
:-D


Hope you liked it!

Saturday, May 19, 2012

BOOK GIVEAWAY!

Thanks again to the amazing Britney Jensen for yesterday's interview! If you missed it, go read it to hear about her writing and indie-publishing experiences.

Today is the day! Here's what you need to do to win a copy of Britney's books...

1. LIKE Britney's page on Facebook (GO HERE).

2. Follow Britney on Twitter (GO HERE).

3. Leave SEPARATE comments below saying you've done these things, and each comment will be an entry to win!

(P.S. If you wanna follow me too, that's awesome, and I'll count it as half-entries... in otherwords, it won't count unless you do two. Here are my twitter and Facebook links, or you can follow through blogger over yonder --->)

If you already own RISEN, then we'll just send you RETURN. If you don't own either, guess what - you get both!

You have until 5/24/12 (that's Thursday) at midnight AZ time (PDT) to enter.

Winner will be chosen by Random[.]org and announced on Friday 5/25/12.

Awesome and easy, right? Get to it! Good luck!

-DC

Friday, May 18, 2012

Author Interview: Britney Jensen

Today I am SO excited to feature an interview with the amazing, beautiful, indie-author, Britney Jensen. I interviewed Britney right around the release of her first book, RISEN last year (click here to read it!) Now, her second book, RETURN was just released last month.


The Author
In connection with this, Britney has graciously agreed to give a copy of RETURN (and if you don't have it already, RISEN as well) to one lucky winner on this blog! The rules for the giveaway will be posted tomorrow, so come back and check it out for your chance to win one (or two!) incredible books!


If you're not into giveaways and just want to READ IT, then GO HERE to order your copies! (Available in print, Kindle, and Nook formats.)


And now, here's Britney!


DC: First off, congrats on the release of RETURN! Having been through the self-pub process once already, how was it different this second time around?
BJ: This time we knew what to expect and what we didn't want to do ourselves. For RISEN, we didn't know how to create a working table of contents on the Kindle version. This time around, we found a guy and hired him to create one for us. I think little touches like that make a big difference. I also had RETURN edited by someone other than myself or my family before I put it out there. I have to say, my editor did a really good job.  =) 


Book One: Risen
DC: Well, I'm glad you have such faith in your editor ;-) So, in RISEN you write from two POV's. In RETURN you now have three. Was it easier to write from one perspective versus another? Were the ones from RISEN easier or harder than the new voice(s)?
BJ: Yes, now there are three POV's in RETURN. I've always heard their individual voices in my head. (Does that mean I need meds?) Even in RISEN, I knew what Finn was thinking, so it was only natural for him to have his own POV in RETURN. I think it adds a new element. We know what Sunny thinks of Finn and how she feels about him. Now it's Finn's turn to tell his side. I think I pattern their voices after people I know, so it isn't too difficult to mimic that in my writing.  


DC: I remember you tweeting that you were so excited to have figured out the "perfect ending" for RETURN. Without giving away too much, what was it about that idea that made it perfect for this book?
BJ: During the months of writing RETURN, always nagging in the back of my mind was the fact that I had no clue where I wanted to end it. It kept me up at nights. Then one stormy afternoon it honestly felt like I was handed the perfect ending. It just appeared in my mind. (I see my writing in pictures, like a movie). It seems perfect to me because there is so much build-up of intensity and conflict that I couldn't just tie everything up with a neat little bow. It leaves a lot of possibility for Book #3 which I think lends a little bit of fun and mystery and, hopefully, a lot of anticipation for what will happen next.   


DC: Sunny's character is much more assertive in RETURN.  Was that a conscious choice by you, or did Sunny lead you in that direction? 
BJ: Absolutely it was a conscious choice! I didn't want Sunny to seem like a damsel in distress that needed saving. I wanted her to be able to make her own moves and stand on her own two feet. I always envisioned her that way, but the first book didn't allow me to explore that side of her very much. RETURN really lets me showcase Sunny's strengths. I think girls need to read about assertive women rather than women who will sit on the sidelines and let all the action be determined by everyone else.   


Book Two: Return
DC: Similarly, do you feel that your characters take the story by the reins? How much "control," so to speak, do you feel you have, as the author, over their actions and the story?
BJ: This is an interesting question. I don't know how much control I have over the story, which probably means I don't have any at all. Sometimes I'll write something and later think, "They would have never done that," and have to go back and change it. My characters demand that I be true to them. They each have their own personalities and baggage which determines what they'll do in any given situation. I have to make sure I'm present with that all the time otherwise the story wouldn't work.


DC: The settings in RETURN vary more than in RISEN. Have you been to any of the places you write about? And what made you choose those places?
BJ: Yes, I've been to all of the places in my books. I chose Montana for RISEN because, to be frank, I love it. My favorite city in Montana is Whitefish. It's absolutely serene and beautiful, and I envisioned Reverence in the surrounding mountains. I need a vacation home there desperately. Then a portion of RETURN takes place in Salt Lake City which is where I grew up. I don't live there anymore and I miss it. So, at least I get to visit when I write.


DC: Since you're writing a series, you've obviously had some things outlined or planned from the beginning. Other than main plot points, are you an outliner, or a pantser ("by-the-seat-of-your-pants" writer)?
BJ: I'm a "pantser" all the way. It's torture for me to write anything down, ever. I can't keep lists or schedules. Of course I get some ideas, but to flesh everything out before I wrote it would be to steal the joy that is creativity in the moment. It's more frustrating and time-consuming my way, for sure. But it's the way I work best. 


The Set!
DC: I know you listen to music while you write, what are some songs or artists that helped you get through RETURN?
BJ: Oh my, I love this question. Metric and The Yeah Yeah Yeah's were invaluable to me while writing. Metric's Help I'm Alive, Stadium Love, Combat Baby, and Gimme Sympathy were some favorites. And by The Yeah Yeah Yeah's, I loved Heads Will Roll, Runaway, Down Boy, and Maps. And I know it's sort of old, but if I ever needed to get in the mood to write MakeDamnSure by Taking Back Sunday always did it for me. 


DC: Since you're having a baby soon (yaaayyyy!) you'll probably want to take a break, or at least take your time with book 3. When do you anticipate it being released?
BJ: YAY for both of us girl! I have been taking a little break because of the fatigue and nausea. I really want to start writing but I think if I try to start when I don't feel 100%, it'll just end up being terrible and I'll have to redo it anyway. I really, really want to have the book finished before the baby comes - which is in November. So maybe a release shortly after that? Don't hold me to that though. This might be wishful thinking. 


DC: For those considering self-publishing, what advice would you give?
BJ: It is so worth it! You have absolutely nothing to lose. There are a lot of people out there who support indie writers; it's a great community to be a part of! If you're not sure how to do something, hire someone who does and don't stress over it. There are a lot of people who will convert your book to Kindle for super cheap, or who will help you design your cover, or who will edit and help you revise your work. The resources are there, you just have to use them! Seeing your very own book available to the public is the most fulfilling feeling in the world. Don't let some agent tell you no, take control of your work and get it out there so I can read it!


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There you have it folks! Come back tomorrow to enter the giveaway. And many-much-thanks to Britney for taking the time to do this!


-DC

Monday, May 14, 2012

First Loves Blogfest

I hate that I never find out about these things until the last minute...

Today, the awesome Alex J. Cavanaugh is hosting the First Loves Bloghop. I'm waaaaayy down on the list, so I'm not really expecting everyone to jump up and comment. But, it's something to blog about, and I'm out of ideas at the moment...

The rules are, post your first loves in the categories of Movie, Music, Books, and Person (or people).

Here we go!

MOVIE:
I've said it before. The first movie I can ever recall asking to watch repeatedly was The Princess Bride. It's not perfect... Buttercup is pretty helpless in my opinion. But it's the most quote-able movie in my arsenal. I can't tell you the number of times my family and I have said, "It's possible... pig."

Also, it doesn't get any better than this when it comes to love stories. It's NOT a love triangle, though it has the appearance of one. I mean let's be honest... Humperdink doesn't really love Buttercup. He only wants to marry her because she's beautiful. And she doesn't love him either. She's only ever loved Westley.

MUSIC:
There were some artists I was introduced to before this, but my first music obsession was HANSON. I was in 7th grade when their first big album came out (Middle of Nowhere). It was from those songs that I learned how to harmonize and taught myself how to transcribe music. I owe them so much. To this day, when I check up on these guys, I have a huge amount of respect for them.

They grew up to be good guys, got married, have such cute families, and still make awesome, clean, music.

Second Place is *NSync. They deserve a mention, because they taught me how to dance. I recorded their Disney Channel concert, and watched it over and over to learn all the dances. I remember showing some of my friends, a little afraid of being made fun of, but they were seriously impressed. And I was proud.

BOOK:
The books I really truly LOVE the most, and quote the most, and know the most about, are probably the Harry Potter books. But this is about FIRST loves. And did I love some books before Harry came along? Yes I did.

I wish David Eddings was still alive. He is my hero. He wrote a lot of books, but my favorites are two five-book series' called The Belgariad and The Mallorean. He meant the story to kind of make fun of fantasy novels in general. It does that in many ways, but at the same time is so true to what a fantasy novel really is. If you've never read them, you should. In fact, I think I'll put them on my TBR list. I need a good trip down nostalgia lane.

PERSON:
I wrote about a lot of boys in my journals... I can't think of which one was first, I'm not really sure I ever actually loved any of them. Most of it was just infatuation. There were boys at school, boys from church, famous boys, and literary crushes. But the first person (aside from my family) that I've ever truly loved, is my husband.

I know, I know. But I promise I'm being honest. He was the first guy who ever made me feel truly beautiful. And that's saying something, because I had serious self-worth issues. Sometimes I still do. He is such a man for continuing to put up with me and my craziness.


END.

-DC

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P.S. BABY UPDATE!
We're now 24 weeks along, and baby Peter is about a pound, and just over a foot long! So exciting :-D

Friday, May 11, 2012

Flash Factory!

Today I'm participating in Jessa Russo's Flash Factory Friday #3.

RULES:
*Use the prompt
*50-350 word limit
*Enter within the 24 hour time limit.

The awesome Tamara (Feaky Snucker) won last week, and here's the prompt she chose for this weeks competition --->

Ready... Set... FLASH!


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Addiction By Darci Cole (346 words)



I clenched my leg muscles to relieve the stiffness. I dared not move to stretch. I didn’t want to disturb the leaves and branches hiding me. I sucked on a long piece grass to distract from my hunger and desire for a cigarette.  
The sun had gone down. I knew she would appear soon. I always came here as often as possible just to see her. It’s an addiction – one of my many. Smoking, drinking, sex – I’d give them all up for one look into her eyes. Sometimes I think I only do those things to numb the pain. She never looks at me.  
And why should she? I’m not the captain of the football team, or even of the chess team. I’m just a nobody that the high school girls don’t pay attention to unless they’re drunk.  
A light began to glow beyond my hiding place. My eyes fixed onto the top of the stairs.
 Within the white light appeared a shimmer of pink. It stretched to the height of the woman before the dark line of her hair broke through. She materialized before my eyes.  
I didn’t know what she was. Some of my guesses included nymph, faerie, dryad, or siren. Perhaps she was Calypso, or Aphrodite reincarnated. All I knew for certain was she was beautiful, and I could not be satisfied until I spoke to her.  
Slowly, she descended the stone steps. Her dress was sheer. It always gave me a knot in my stomach. I’d seen women unclothed before, but this was different. It gave me chills. I felt like a hormone-crazed fourteen-year-old again.  
But it wasn’t her body that brought me back so often. It was those eyes. Dark, deep black eyes. I could never see any white in them.  
She flowed. Every movement purposeful, yet patient. 
Then she turned toward me. Her black eyes fixed on mine for the first time. 
I froze. Whether I could not move, or would not, I couldn’t tell. 
Then she spoke, “You will die.”  
I felt sure she was right. I didn’t mind.
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Thoughts? Happy Friday!

-DC

Thursday, May 10, 2012

Thoughtful Thursday: What the Edit?

Soooooo, I've been a little addicted to Twitter lately... so much so that I literally almost typed a hashtag in front of the word "Twitter" just now...

*back to the keyboard*
*click click clickety click*
Alas, I was not picked for The Writers Voice contest (almost did a hashtag again), but I don't mind. I had SO much fun following along, and I learned a lot in the process. I've made some amazing new writer friends - HILARIOUS new writer friends. I'm so glad I jumped in rather than sat out... like I was going to.

In retrospect, I'm actually very grateful I wasn't chosen. After entering, (like, the same day) I realized that the MS I had was not my best work - I could do better. So I immediately started re-writing.

I didn't start from scratch. I kept a copy of the full manuscript intact for reference, then pasted the whole thing into a new doc and went at it. I didn't end up changing POV's... though that was a toughie.... I think I'm nearly halfway through. It's kind of hard to tell because I keep cutting big sections, and later I'll add in little bits here and there as I re-arrange things.

So far, I feel like the flow is much better, and the pacing is better too. Plus I've thought of a much better ending than the one I had. Other than that, I'm trying to cut out everything that isn't absolutely necessary to the story. Then when I'm done I'll go through and add back in bits of character development, setting, and things like that.

Since this is my first manuscript, I'm still kind of playing with the whole "revision/edit/feedback" thing to figure out what works best for me. I really want to get this MS finished and cleaned up by the end of May so that I can start querying.

And while I'm querying, I'll begin my next MS...

which will be.....

I haven't picked yet :-/

Gah! I'm so indecisive. Good thing I wasn't a judge for The Writer's Voice... Part of me wishes I knew where the market trends were going so I could write toward them... but alas, there's really no telling. Everyone says, "write what you love," but that doesn't help when I have SIX possibilities, and I LOVE them all.

What works best for you when writing and editing? Do you outline and leave room for stretching? Or do you write-by-the-seat-of-your-pants? Do you have beta readers/critique partners? Or do you trust your own guts?

I'm still learning...

-DC

Wednesday, May 9, 2012

Writer Wednesday

Since I'm going crazy waiting for THIS to finish, I thought I'd take a break. Today I'm going to let you in on some of the projects I have up my sleevies. Either in progress, or brainstorming stages, or just an idea. You can tell me which ones sound the most interesting to you.

1. THE SIGHT (YA High Fantasy)
(Completed)

Kolina receives a divine calling: reclaim her family’s royal inheritance and save a kingdom from oppression. But on the journey, she fights more with her insecurities than the evil King. She must prove, to herself more than anyone, that she is worthy of the task, and equal to the challenge. (Plus books 2 & 3 in outline.)

2. NETÁE (YA Paranormal Fantasy/SciFi)
Maelie hates her adoptive parents for moving her across the country. But she soon discovers who - or what - her real parents are. She travels the country finding others of her kind, in order to escape the government's cruelty and return to Netáe.

3. SHIFT (YA Paranormal Fantasy/Superhero Novel)
Tyce has discovered a new talent - one that allows him a lot more freedom. He discovers he's not alone, and is thrown into a centuries old war. Both sides want his powers, and will do anything to catch him. Which side will he choose? Or will he get a chance to choose at all?

4. OF EMILY (YA High Fantasy)
Princess Emily is supposed to marry Duke Vanden. When she disguises herself and runs away to escape the wedding, Duke Vanden attacks the castle in retribution. With the help of her new outlaw friends, Emily returns to save her family and bring Duke Vanden to justice.

5. (UNTITLED) YA Thriller/Mystery
{Unnamed girl} moves to a new town after her father's unexpected death. Suddenly everything is going wrong, and she's getting blamed for it. After escaping from the juvi-jail, she and the resident-geek of the school follow a trail of clues to discover who's been getting her in trouble.

6. THANE (YA Paranormal/Light Romance)
Thane Williams is good at what he does. When he unexpectedly becomes enamored by a girl in need, he throws his duties aside in favor of keeping her for himself. But his superior officers are unyielding. If he can't do the job, they'll find someone who will. And they'll take care of him at the same time.


Well, there they are! Sorry if some of them are kind of vague, but I don't want to give away ALL my secrets, now do I?

Muah ha ha ha.... {maniacal laugh}

So what do you think? Which one is your favorite? Which is your LEAST favorite? Do any of them sound "overdone" or "cliche

Thanks for your thoughts! <3 you guys <3

-DC

Monday, May 7, 2012

Reclusive Writer's Club

WHEW!
If you're looking for my entry to THE WRITER'S VOICE click on that link at the top of the sidebar over there ------------>

First of all, I want to give a big THANK YOU and WELCOME to those who are new followers! It really means a lot to me that you read, so thanks for being here!

After entering The Writer's Voice on Thursday, life practically spiraled out of control around here. For some reason, my stress levels spiked on Friday and Saturday, causing Braxton Hicks contractions...

Yeah, that's been causing a little alarm...

Then, I had my first official "Reclusive Writer Club" moment on Saturday night. It was awesome.

I usually don't mind (too much) putting down my writing for family things or to hang out with friends, especially if I haven't seen them in a while. Usually that's because I'm not writing anyway... because I'm bad at consistency. I've felt often that I'd rather write than watch T.V. or play games with my husband (poor guy), but this was my first instance of "public reclusivity." (<-- I just made that up, blogger says it's not a word. Do you like it?)

See, I've been writing (and revising and editing) my own work every day. All week. For hours at a time. And I'm not even a quarter of the way through where I want to be by next week. When we decided to go to a family ice cream party at a nearby park I didn't think much of it. But while I was sitting there among a bunch of people catching up on "how's life, what are you doing now, how are the kids/grand-kids" etc, I found myself thinking of my characters and where I was in my read-through... my next thought was:

"I'd rather be writing..."

And I was proud of myself. It felt like a milestone in my writing journey. I realized I'd rather be writing. I did feel bad for thinking that while in the company of such amazing people, and I made a greater effort to talk and visit after that. But as an aspiring writer, it felt good.

Maybe it's a writer thing.

(For any family who read this, please know I love you all, and I had a blast seeing you and catching up on Saturday. I really did.)

Have you ever had a "Reclusive Writer's Club" moment? Was it at home with spouse or kids, or in public like mine?

Is it good, or bad that we have moments like this? Thoughts?

-DC
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P.S. Baby Update!
I'm now 23 weeks and Baby Peter weighs about as much as a large mango. We like mangoes. And he's now more than 11 inches long, head to bottom. WooHoo!

Thursday, May 3, 2012

The Writer's Voice Entry # 128 - SIGHT

: : EDIT : : I have a NEW query up... check it out HERE!

Hello faithful readers! I am SO freakin' lucky to be entered in a contest called The Writer's Voice. Hosted by Cupid, Brenda Drake, Monica B.W., and Krista Van Dolzer. I'm entering SIGHT, and I'm excited! I couldn't resist. So without further ado, my entry:


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Title: SIGHT
Genre: YA High Fantasy
Word Count: 73,000


Query:


Kolina’s seventeenth birthday brings a power called The Sight, bestowed by the Gods to those of special birth. She learns that her grandfather was the crown prince of a neighboring kingdom, Robaea, whose inheritance was cruelly stolen from him. Now, a tyrant sits in his place. Kolina has been chosen by the Gods to reclaim the throne and reunite the three Kingdoms into one.

But Kolina doesn’t know if she can do it, or how to begin. Robaea, once grand, is now in ruins because of the selfish “King” Alrik. To fight him, Kolina’s grandfather leads her to some faithful friends, who train her in combat and magic. Kolina will need these skills as she overcomes bandits, traps, enchantments, and bewitched followers of the king.

What’s more, Kolina and her companions soon discover that Alrik knows of their existence and is massing an army to kill them. In order to overthrow Alrik for good, Kolina must first conquer her insecurities. She must prove – to herself more than anyone – that she is worthy to be High Queen of a reunited Kingdom.



First 250 words:


The barn smelled of hay and mud as Kolina entered. She blinked a few times to get used to the darkness. The wooden walls were aged and frail. It looked as though they would collapse at the wrong move.

Or perhaps the right move, she thought.

One of the cows made a grunt, eager to be milked. Kolina set down the empty pails and basket. She side-stepped a puddle from the night’s storm, tucked a strand of her long dark hair behind her ear, and settled down to her task. Being the shortest person in the farm, she was given “short” jobs – cows and chickens. She hummed to the beat of the splattering in her pail.

Visions of her latest dream played before her eyes as she worked: a castle corridor lined with soft carpets, a carved stone fireplace surrounded by plush velvet chairs, a gold satin gown sliding over her skin….

“Koli? Kolina?” She was jarred from her reverie.

“I’m in here, Dax,” she shouted, thinking, where I always am this time of day.

Dax poked his dark-haired-blue-eyed face around doors and said, “Oh, good. Mum says once you’ve finished with the animals you can take the day off.” He paused for a moment before adding, “Happy birthday!”

Kolina smiled in spite of herself. “Thank you Dax,” she said in a singsong voice.

As Dax ran away, she realized she’d forgotten it was her birthday – odd, as she’d been counting the days for months. She’d been sure seventeen would feel special, but now it was here she felt slightly disappointed.


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-DC

Can I Get Your Thoughts?

Cheesily done cover... by me.
So, I've been needing to re-write my WiP for a while... I knew in January, but I put it off 'til recently, because I was a little nervous. Today I would like to put myself out there for your judgement.

Below are the first two pages or so of my current work in progress... the before version, and the after version.

I would really like to hear what you think. Well, I would really like to hear that it's improved... but I'll leave that to your discretion. I admire all of you for either your writing ability or reading tastes. Your opinions matter to me. I'm a little nervous, but I would love to hear your honest thoughts. Here you go.


Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Storyteller Challenge

I love these... I get 20-700 words to tell a story about this image:

Now wait! Before you read MY entry, go write your own! It doesn't have to be awesome, or perfect, just do it! If you don't like the image (how can you not) go to Shah's site here and check out the word prompt. It's a pretty funny one this week :-)

Now, my entry, coming in at 682 words...

“I still don’t understand why you’re doing this.” 
“You wouldn’t – you’re a bird.” 
“Excuse me! I am currently a bird. I have feelings for girls just like you do for this guy. I just don’t think putting on a show is the way to catch him.” 
“I’ve heard your opinion, Eli, and I don’t like it. You can stop trying to convince me otherwise.” 
He flies away. 
The ground is rough on my bare feet. It’s a warm night. I know that just over the next ridge I’ll find them. Adam is “out with the boys” tonight, having a bonfire at the river. I can hear them laughing, playing their guitars together. 
We’ve been dating for a year. So I thought he’d believe me. But when I tried to tell him I’m a witch, he just laughed. 
I laughed too, pretending it had been a joke. But he’d believe me this time. 
I adjust the strap on my tank-top, and pull my wand from a pocket in my skirt. I peek over the ridge and see the group, all seated on lawn chairs around a huge fire. There are ten of them. I hear an ahem, and look up to see my brother Eli, now in human form, sitting on a branch. 
“Kate, don’t do this. You’ll get caught.” 
“Says who?” I whisper. “You’re not going to tell anyone.” 
“No, but they have ways of finding out, even here.” 
My resolve shakes for a moment. “No, I have to! He has to know.” 
“Wait,” he says, jumping down. “Let me scare off his friends first. They don’t need to know.” 
I consider this. “You’re right. Go ahead.” 
“I’ll give you green sparks when they’re all out.” 
I watch as he morphs into the bird again and flies away. Suddenly he is dive bombing the guys around the fire. I smile, because Adam is laughing. He would find it funny. 
Soon, Adam is standing, shouting to his friends through his laughter, “Come back, guys! The bird’s gone!” 
I wait a moment longer, and see green sparks fly up above the trees beyond the bonfire clearing. That’s my cue. 
I walk over the ridge and down the slope. “Hello, Adam.” 
He turns at the sound of my voice. “Kate? What are you doing here?” 
“Coming to show you something.” He sees my wand and looks at me, confused. 
“Really?” he asks, raising his eyebrows. He’s trying to play it off like I’m going to seduce him. 
“Yes. Do you remember the other day,” I start circling him, “When we joked about me being a witch?” 
He shrugs and smiles, “Yeah, what about it?” 
I stop and look at him seriously. “I wasn’t joking.” 
He scoffs at me. 
I point my wand at him. 
He laughs out loud. “Kate, what are you doing?” 
I smile. “Showing you something you never thought you’d see.” 
I point my wand to the sky and shout, “Perriculum!” 
Red sparks fly out of the tip, shining on Adam’s astounded face. 
Then I say, “Lumos!” and my wand tip lights up like a firefly. 
I move my wand back to his chest and say, “Nox.” The light goes out. “We’ve been dating for a year, Adam,” I say, now circling him again. “I thought you’d believe me before. But I hope you do now. And I hope it doesn’t change how you feel about me.” 
“And if it does?” he asks, his eyes on my wand. 
I stop walking and shrug. “I’ll make you forget I ever told you, then break up with you. You’ll never understand why.” 
His gaze goes from my wand to my face. His eyes are sad. “I – I didn’t mean that, Kate.” 
I stare back, confused. “Then what did you mean?” 
“If you’ll take that stick away I’ll tell you.” 
I lower my wand, slow and reluctant. Then face the ground. 
“I meant,” he says, “That this is probably the coolest thing I’ve ever seen!” 
I look to him again, my chest filled with excitement. “Really?” 
“Um, yeah! What else can you do with that thing?” 


Haha! I love it. What did you think?

-DC

P.S. Happy birthday to my mommy! Love you Mom!

Tuesday, May 1, 2012

A Writer's Worth

I have some thoughts I'd like to share today, and I hope I make sense... but first, a story. I'm not sure where I heard it, but I found it intriguing.


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A speaker started off his seminar holding up a $20.00 bill. In the room of 200, he asked,"Who would like this $20 bill?" Hands started going up. He said,"I am going to give this $20 to one of you but first, let me do this. He proceeded to crumple up the $20 dollar bill. He then asked, "Who still wants it?" Still the hands were up in the air. Well, he replied, "What if I do this?" And he dropped it on the ground and started to grind it into the floor with his shoe. He picked it up, now crumpled and dirty."Now, who still wants it?" Still the hands went into the air.



"My friends, we have all learned a very valuable lesson. No matter what I did to the money, you still wanted it because it did not decrease in value. It was still worth $20. Many times in our lives,we are dropped, crumpled, and ground into the dirt by the decisions we make and the circumstances that come our way. We feel as though we are worthless. But no matter what has happened or what will happen, you will never lose your value. Dirty or clean, crumpled or finely creased, you are still priceless to those who DO LOVE you. The worth of our lives comes not in what we do or who we know, but by WHO WE ARE. You are special- Don't EVER forget it."



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First, I want to draw attention to the fact that he was comparing people to money. I'm not saying there's anything wrong with it, but somehow I find it interesting. We, obviously, are worth so much more than a piece of paper with numbers on it. And yet it's analogies like this, seeing something of worth to us be compared to ourselves, that remind us so poignantly how much we ought to value ourselves.

Second, why is it that reminders like this are almost necessary for us? For me, as a wife, mother, and woman in general, I find that reminders like this lift me up. When I am feeling disappointed or low, it's good to be reminded that I am of worth. 

And third, for my writer friends. So many of us write because we have a spark, a desire, something inside us telling us to write. We don't focus on the money to be made (or lack thereof) or the possible publishing contract. At least not at the beginning. We write because we love it. But I think there comes a time for all of us - revising, querying, getting rejections - when we can get discouraged. Whether it's because we aren't seeing the monetary "fruits of our labors," or because we feel like we're fighting for a lost cause, it can be difficult to work through those times.


I really like this analogy for times such as those. We value money because of what it can bring us. We ought to value ourselves, and therefore our work, even more. Not because of what it brings, but because of what it does for us.


With every word we write, we learn. With every word we cut, or change, or switch around, we learn.


Our writing teaches us.


So if you're feeling down, trying to trudge through a tough time, remember the crumpled-smashed-stepped-on-dirty $20 bill.


Would you still want it? Is it still of worth to you?


You, and your work, are worth so much more.


Write on.


-DC