Monday, October 31, 2011

Love Me, Letter 5

*Sigh* I give up. Nobody ever participates, so I'm gonna stop asking...
You'll just get to enjoy my letters, and if you feel inclined to write one yourself, please share it with me...
I'd love to read it :-)

Jack Skelington
via, no, I did not carve any of these pumpkins...
I found this one thru google.
Dear Halloween,

I like you. You're fun.

I'm not a huge fan of so much candy, but I can look past that; I mean, it was great when I was a kid.

I think my favorite part of your holiday is the dressing up. I love parties, and pumpkins, and friends, and food, and everything else...

But having a perfectly legitimate excuse to dress up and make a spectacle of myself in some way...

now that's fun.


I didn't carve Perry either,
but I know the guy who did. Awesome.
I apologize that we didn't do much this year to celebrate. The budget's a bit tight, so we had to make do. We're lucky that we have a pirate costume that fits Monkey, and Turner and I decided to go as "black-eyed-peas"... pictures to come.

I am sad to report that we haven't carved our own pumpkins, and we haven't put up any decoration (wow, what grinches we are...)...

But we ARE going to parties! In fact, we've already been to one! It was Saturday.... and I forgot to take my camera. Monkey was loving the strobe lights and black lights, and pumpkins, and music... it was awesome to the max-izzle, I tell ya.

the piece de resistance...
Hogwarts/HP
via Awesome Amy
And tonight we are crashing TWO parties! One family deal, and one creep-tacular deal... (that's Mandy's... we're planning on it, it'll depend on how Monkey's feelin)

So anyway, I just wanted to let you know, I DO love your holiday, and I enjoy it every year. I'd love to someday be the cool lady who organizes tons of Halloween events and makes really cool homemade decorations and costumes, and when I'm rich, I will do that...

you have my word.


Pumpkins and Pirates,

Page Traveler


P.S.
What's YOUR costume???

HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!

Friday, October 28, 2011

Writing Exercise #3

Taken from WritersDigest.com

Plotting Triple-O Method

This exercise appealed to me because I've had a few of my editors tell me that the "climax" of my story isn't really very good. Here's the text directly from Writer's Digest...
***

Use the Triple-O method to create a plot “skeleton” for some of your story ideas.  Good places to start would be the clipping/idea file you’ve been building all throughout this workshop and the Character Profile Sheets.  For each story idea, start with a clean sheet of paper (or new computer document) and try to describe each of the three “O’s”: Objective, Obstacles and Outcome.  This also would be a good time to try to come up with some possible titles for these story ideas. (Jot down as many appropriate titles for each idea as you think of, even if you don’t think they’re exactly right. Coming up with good titles is often a process of trial and error.)
If you’re having trouble applying the Triple-O method to your story ideas, it just may be that you need a little more practice. As Nanovic suggests later in his Writer’s Yearbook article, a good way to do that is to work the process in reverse–start with a published story and see if you can identify the three O’s. After you’ve reduced a number of completed stories to their essence in this way, you should be comfortable applying the method to your own undeveloped ideas.
Of course, if you feel you have a good understanding of the Triple-O method, but are still unable to apply it to a particular idea, it probably means that idea needs a little more thought—perhaps you haven’t given the character a real problem to solve or put a strong enough obstacle in his path to make the story interesting. That’s why the Triple-O method is so useful: It allows you to test your ideas before you spend a lot of time writing a story that isn't “there” yet. If you find ideas in your file that don’t contain all of the O’s, don’t discard them; make whatever notes you can at this point and then re-file them. Sometimes an idea just needs a little time to ferment before it’s ready to become a story.
***
Now... my plot definitely has an objective and an outcome, it's the obstacles I'm having a hard time with. Also, the fact that the larger story is broken into three books makes my ultimate objective too far off... I need the first book to have an objective of it's own. That could be:
1. Getting in and out of the Record Cave safely and undetected...
2. Rescuing a member of the company who gets kidnapped...
3. or something...
Those are the main objectives I have right now, and it makes things anticlimactic... I could try to flip the order, but it mixes certain things up in doing that, so I'm not sure what I'll do...


If I leave the order the way it is, then I'll have to intensify the second event (which shouldn't be too hard actually now that I think about it.) In that event, Kolina will have an opportunity to use what she's learned, and grow in wisdom, patience, and strength (which really are the three key themes of the entire series anyway, so it works...). I'm glad I've got this place, so I can type myself through these things...


As far as the objective, right now it's simply to gather everything they need so that they can accomplish their bigger goal... all without getting caught.


Obstacles... we cross a few. Guards, bandits...hormones... you know. Really I need to make sure we hit something like that in every chapter though, especially after they get going on the road.


Anyway, those are my thoughts... on my thoughts. Thanks for traveling today! 




X's and O's?


Page Traveler




P.S.
Are you writing fiction? What are the Objectives, Obstacles, and Outcomes of your story?

Thursday, October 27, 2011

Potter Kids #2

This is another little fan fiction ditty I wrote up when I was bored...
Let me know what you think!


                James was bored, as usual.
                Professor Binns’s class was theepitome of boredom. He twirled his quill slowly between his fingers, letting itbrush up against his face every now and then. He was nearly asleep. Then thebell rang and the students around him began to move, packing their books andheading out of the room. James did the same.
He exited the classroom and turned down the corridor toward his nextclass. The glazed look he’d had as he fell asleep was still upon him as hestaggered zombielike with the crowd. Someone bumped into him and it jarred himenough to bring him to reality. He shook his head, trying to clear it. Then heheard a voice.
“Stop! Give it back!”
It was his brother, Albus.
James swept down the hallway past slower students toward the sound of thecommotion. Albus’s bag was being held high above his head by a seventh yearSlytherin. James knew he wouldn’t win a Muggle fight against that one, but ifhe cursed him… well it would definitely mean detention for a week either way.
“Put it down!” James shouted, pointing his wand directly at the Slytherinboy.
The boy laughed. “Why should I?” There was a crowd of students growingaround them now.
“Because if you don’t I’ll give you teeth the size of a walrus.” Jamessaid calmly. “Now put it down.”
Slowly, the boy put Albus’s bag onto the floor. Albus was too busyadmiring his brother to notice, until James said, “Pick it up, Al, what are youwaiting for?”
Albus snatched his bag and went to stand near James. Just then theheadmistress came striding into the scene. “What’s going on here? Potter, putdown your wand. Magic is not allowed in the corridors, you know that.”
“Yes ma’am.” James lowered his wand, but didn’t take his eyes off theSlytherin.
“Will someone please tell me what happened here?”
There was only silence, until a small blond witch stepped forward andsaid, “Please Ma’am, that boy was holding Albus’s bag, threatening to throw itout the window. James made him stop.”
Professor McGonagall reviewed the scene, Albus cowering beside James, andthe two of them staring, one frightened and the other angry, at the Slytherinboy.
“Potter, is this true?” She asked James.
“Yes, Ma’am.” James answered still not averting his gaze.
Professor McGonagall sighed. “Very well then. You,” she pointed to theSlytherin, “I’m taking ten points from Slytherin for your misbehavior. I do notwant to hear of it happening again, is that understood?”
“Yes, Professor.” The Slytherin replied, sneering.
“And you two,” she turned to Albus and James, “I want to see in my officenow. Follow me. The rest of you, off to your classes!” She continued down thehall to her office. She stopped in front of a large statue of a gargoyle andsaid, “Remember.”
The gargoyle stepped aside, revealing a spiral staircase that shemounted, with the boys following. When she reached the door, she swept inside,holding it open for them before closing and latching it. She went to the deskand sat, inviting them to do the same.
James looked around the room. It was covered in portraits of sleepingwitches and wizards, each one with a small plaque below bearing their name.Then there were shelves that held yet more pictures. These were of people;families, individuals, gravestones; he even thought he saw one of Hogwarts,though it looked damaged somehow.
“I brought you here,” said Professor McGonagall, “To introduce you to twopeople. They were planning to wait until all three of Harry Potter’s childrenwere at school, but when I told him of Albus’s appearance,” she looked intoAlbus’s eyes, “One of them insisted on seeing you now. They will meet littleLily when she comes as well, but for now you’ll do. Boys, I’d like you to meetthe headmasters who led this school while your parents were here, AlbusDumbledore, and Severus Snape.” She turned to the two portraits closest to herdesk, hanging right next to each other. One was an old man, long hair andbeard, smiling serenely from behind half-moon spectacles. The other was ayounger man, with sallow pale skin, dark greasy hair, and a look of longing onhis face.
James had heard stories from his parents about these two men; how Harryhad trusted Dumbledore, how he’d hated Snape, and the sacrifices of both men tobring down the one called Voldemort. As enthralled as he was with seeing them,he knew that Albus would be more so. He looked to his younger brother and as heexpected, saw nothing but wide-eyed amazement. James stood and helped Albus todo so, walking him toward the portraits.
“Hello boys.” said Dumbledore. “I am so glad to know that your father andmother have been blessed with such noble and honest children. We heard whathappened in the corridors a few minutes ago. It was very brave of you, James,to stand up for your brother. No less than I would expect from the son of Harryand Ginny Potter.”
“Thank you, sir.” James said, nodding.
“Come here, boy.” said Snape in a hoarse whisper. The two Pottersapproached him together. Even though they knew he’d done right in the end, hestill looked menacing. “Look at me.” He said, staring at Albus.
Albus looked up, and the green eyes met the black. They remained lockedfor a moment or so, before Snape said, “You have your grandmother’s eyes.” andleaned back in his chair.
“You knew Gramma Lily?” Albus shouted, startling the others, except forSnape.
“I did.” He nodded slowly. “And she was the kindest person I’ve everknown.”
The boys stood still, amazed at the opportunity they’d been given to meetthese men. James said, “Thank you, sirs, both of you.” He felt he should’vesaid more, but couldn’t think of what.
“Enjoy your time here, young men.” said Dumbledore. “We’ll be here if youneed us.”
Professor McGonagall led them out of her office. When they reached thebottom of the stairs, she handed them each a rolled up slip of parchment. “Handthis to your teachers, and you will not be punished for being late. Enjoy therest of your classes.” She gave a small mischievous smile, and turned back upthe staircase. The boys stood in wonder, watching the gargoyle take up itspost, before looking at each other. Grins spread across their faces, and theylaughed, turning down the hall toward their next classes.

Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Thoughts on Editing...



Last week, I was asked by an author friend to look over her manuscript (which I'd already read for entertainment and loved) to specifically look for typo's and errors.

I'd been at it since Saturday, and I finished yesterday. I have to say, I actually had a LOT of fun doing it!

It's nice to be of help to someone in that way...
especially when I'm being asked for it. I know I'll need help like that... I've already had some people read my book and tell me spots where things aren't working, or point out little errors to me... which I love! Because it helps the story, anything that can be fixed, should be. And especially if more than one person is telling me that something feels weird, it's a good sign to me that I ought to make big changes.

I've never really been an English nut, and there are some grammar rules I couldn't care less about... but when it comes to the basics, I think I have a pretty good grip on what makes a story flow.

For example...

If you're in the middle of a really great kissing scene, and a word is misspelled, or missing?

AAAAARRRGGGHHHHH!!!!!!

That's how I feel about that.

So hey, if you are writing something and need an editor, I promise I'll do the best I can and I won't charge your right arm for doing it... I'll look for little typo's, and let you know when I think something doesn't fit, or isn't explained well, or sounds weird... I'm not a pro, but I have good taste. And that helps.

And if you're not writing something, then just comment below and tell me you think it's cool that I can now say "Mother, Wife, Music Teacher, indi-Writer, AND indi-Editor."

Red Pens and Hi-lighters,

Page Traveler


P.S.
Which bothers you more - little typo's, or inconsistencies (i.e. holes in the story, or something that contradicts something else)?

Tuesday, October 25, 2011

And the Winner is...

First of all...

Yes I am going to draw this out.

On behalf of Britney and myself, I want to thank EVERYONE who entered and participated, because you guys have been awesome!

Secondly...





Oh who am I kidding.


We had a total of 21 entries
(between 8 really cool people).

And now... courtesy of Random.Org, the number generated was:













Which (because I decided to go backwards) means the winner is

ROSEANNE!

So email me your address (PageTraveler@gmail.com) and your gifts will be out to you soon!
(I'll send you an email when they're on the way!)

Congratulations Roseanne, and thanks again to everyone who entered and spread the word. We SO appreciate you, and you are ALL cool kids in my book!


Page Traveler

P.S.
If you're not Roseanne,  click HERE to order your copy of Risen, in paperback, or e-book... ready? Set? GO!

Monday, October 24, 2011

SPECIAL ANNOUNCEMENT!!

I'm changing the deadline for the Ten Thousand Giveaway! We've passed ten thousand, and it seems like everyone who's going to enter has... but just in case...

Cut off for entry is now TONIGHT, Monday Oct. 24th at 8pm ARIZONA time.
(I think it's the same as Cali now, so it'd be pacific standard time...)


So tell any of your friends and family who love to read or write or listen to music to go to THIS PAGE and follow the instructions to enter!

I'll announce the winner tomorrow!

So exciting! Thanks for participating!

-Page Traveler


P.S.
Reminder: prizes include a SIGNED copy of Risen, a journal, and a $10 iTunes gift card!


Love Me Letter 4

Welcome to Love Me Monday!

To participate, just post on your blog or website a little note of love and gratitude to someone you appreciate. Then post the link here in the comments. Start the week off right - with a little more compassion.


(Yes, that's a Harry Potter book...
he did this on his own.)



Today's letter is to Monkey...

***

Dear Monkey,

You are so adorable!

There hasn't really been anything this week that you've done out of the ordinary, but the cuteness levels have definitely increased lately. You often climb up to the bookcase (as in this picture) and pull down a random book (sometimes HP, a dictionary, the scriptures...) and start flipping through the pages. I love it! Your little kid books just aren't cutting it any more I guess.


One of your favorite things lately is to run through the sprinklers.

Though I'm not the best photographer, and my phone is terrible with photos, I'm actually quite proud of this one.

(You can barely see Monkey back by the building, in front of the door...)

You love the water, and now that it's not flipping hot outside, I don't mind staying out there to watch you have fun.

You have also learned how to communicate when you're tired.

You know that your plug (pacifier) and Red Bear (that red blob between the chair and the bucket - his cuddle-buddy) are only for sleep-time. So when you get tired, you either go in and get them, or you ask for them. Usually you'll go down pretty easily after that, and we love seeing you snuggle into your blankets in your awesome big boy bed.

Also, you've gotten very good at saying your ONE word - "GOoooooooo!" It makes us smile :-)

We love you so much little buddy. Hopefully we'll be able to have a little sibling for you soon.

Love,

Mom (Me)

***

Thanks for traveling today!


P.S. 
What funny things did you do or say as a child?

Friday, October 21, 2011

Book Review: Till We Have Faces; by C.S. Lewis

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source
I started reading this book on Monday, having picked it up only because it had Jack's name on it.

I figure anything he writes has got to be good, right?

As you can see on the book cover, it says, "A Myth Retold." He retells a Greek story of three mortal princesses, the youngest of whom was the most beautiful. So beautiful that no mortal man would court her, she was so far above them. Long story short, Cupid falls in love with her, she betrays him, and is set to performing impossible tasks for Venus. After one particularly difficult task, Cupid comes, forgives her, and she is made a goddess. Happily ever after.

That, of course, is the Greek version, and a very watered down one, to be sure.


In this book, the story is told from the perspective of Psyche's oldest sister, who was the ugliest of the three. She loved Psyche, and many others, but learns through the Gods, at the end of her life, that she has been, not loving, but leaning on all these people. She sees that they, because of their love for her, have let her leech (a strong word, but it's the best I can think of) away their life in service to her.

It's an interesting perspective shift. She goes from viewing everything through her virtual veil of love, to seeing the selfishness she's had all, or most, of her life. It makes me wonder if I am seeing things in their proper light? am I treating the people I love with selflessness, or am I using their love to require them to do the things I want them to do?

Now that I ask it, I can see that I do it. I could give a couple of very recent examples...

I think we all probably do, at some point, use those we love for our own ends. Whether it's going on the date I want to go on, or doing something the way I want to do it, or watching what I want to watch... the list could go on.

In the end, right before her death, this woman sees her mistake. She has questioned the Gods all her life for answers to why her lot has been so hard, why all those she loved have been taken from her, why she was born ugly, why, why, why.... Her final words (before she dies in the midst of her writing) are:

"I [said before that the Gods gave] no answer. I know now, Lord, why you utter no answer. You are yourself the answer. Before your face questions die away. What other answer would suffice?"

This is beautiful to me. To see a person having hated the Gods all their life, to finally see the light and know that, not only do they exist, but they were right all along.

I can't possibly give you a more thorough overview of this book without writing a blog post longer than a mile, and I really don't have time for that... (I'm writing this Thursday, and I have two extra little ones running around my house). If you have the time, I suggest you read it. It's written very well, and gives you a lot to think about. Let me know if you do, we can discuss :-)

Thanks for traveling today!

Questions and Answers,

Page Traveler


P.S.
Do you find yourself "using" your loved ones occasionally? Do you sometimes ask for answers in prayer? If you don't receive them right away, are you bitter of it, or understanding? Does it depend on the question?

Lots of thoughts today... share yours! 
And while you're at it why don't you share this post with your friends, you cool kid you. Thanks!

Thursday, October 20, 2011

Writing Exercise #2

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The Perfect Ending

Since reading Risen the other day, I've been obsessing over the ending to my story... as you'll be able to tell here. I've included the full text of the exercise here, and my work below, though my work is mostly for my benefit, since you probably won't get it unless you've read the ending :-)


Link to source: WritersDigest.
"Maybe you knew the ending of your story before you even wrote your rough draft, or maybe you now find yourself unsure of your original choice for the ending.  Here are a couple of exercises that will help you find the best, and perhaps unexpected, ending to your story:

  1. Put the story aside and make a list of all the possible things that could happen in the ending (even if they violate your original vision of the story).  Come at it from every possible angle–the expected and the unexpected, the “soft” and the “hard,” the happy and the sad and whatever lies in between.  You should have a list of at least five or six possible endings.  Now, consider how each option shades the meaning of the story.  This is a time when you must “listen” to your story and see which way it wants to go.  Chances are, the key to your ending lies in the beginning and the middle of the story.  You may discover that the story you’ve written is quite different from the one you set out to write.  That’s fine–happens all the time.  The important thing is not to ruin your story by forcing a wrong ending simply because it adheres to your preconceived  notion of what “should” happen.
  2. Once you’ve discovered what should happen in your ending, there is still the question of technique.  Again, try several different variations, making the final sentence:
    1. A line of description
    2. A line of dialogue
    3. A character’s action
    4. Internal monologue–a character’s thought or feeling."
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Obviously, I can't reveal to you the ending of my story yet. But I will tell you this, it's very abrupt; not at all gentle. So as I've read through this exercise a couple of times, I've come up with a few different ideas of how I could alter it. 

1. Leave it the way it is. Some people won't like it, but perhaps that's what it'll take to get them to read the second book?

2. Move the end scene to earlier, so that the anticipation is still there, but the actual ending is softer.

3. Resolve the end scene.

4. Leave part of the end scene, but not all of it.

5. A combination of 2 and 4...

6. Leave part of the end scene, and add more from the opposing storyline, to give more closure

7. Take out the end scene all together and make it the prologue for Book 2... 


I think I like #7 best... but I also like #6...

#7 would leave us at the end of one adventure, with a little more understanding, and a little more knowledge of what may be to come...

And as far as the second part, I personally love chapters/books that end in a dialogue line, or a character thought. I honestly can't see this book ending any other way... maybe an action would work if it were crazy, I'll have to try it out.

Sidenote: I just had a thought about the antagonist thing from the last writing exercise... as much as I like Nic Cage, and as much as he LOOKS like my villain, he wouldn't be able to do it. Because my characters speak with British accents, and his is terrible.




The End,


Page Traveler


P.S.
What do you like in a book ending? I know it'll be a cliffhanger, so that being the case do you prefer a more abrupt ending, or a softer ending? Dialogue? Action? Description?

Wednesday, October 19, 2011

And Now For Something Completely Different...

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(Fifty cool-kid-points to the first person to correctly identify the movie from which the title of this post was taken...)

Today I have a story to tell.

In October 2003 I went on a trip with a bunch of other young-single-adults from my church. One of them was my best friend, and others were good friends from high school, and yet others were random people I'd never met. The trip was organized by a husband and wife who love YSA's, and always had us all over to their house every Sunday evening for fountain soda, snacks, nachos... but I digress...

On Oct. 30th, we all played hooky... Halloween Hooky.

FIFTY of us (I think there were 50, maybe it was only 30...) hopped on a plane in Phoenix bound for California. We proceeded to crash three theme parks in three days:

Knotts Berry Farm,

Six Flags Magic Mountain, and

Universal Studios.

Six Flags was the best of the three... 
I'm just saying.

It was a great trip, and we had a ton of fun, but that's just the beginning. During the trip, my best friend Erin kept a little notebook of some of the interesting, funny, or otherwise random things said during the trip. Some of which are mine, and I will note those with an asterisk ( * ) I offer no explanations for any of these except to say that they were all said in real time, not made up, and recorded immediately. Following are some of the best... enjoy.
(Names have been changed)


* Will you say something stupid?

1- I just kicked his trash!
2- (later)You [already] kicked me once!

I'm hot stuff!

We found one of those blower things in the bathroom and went *WHOOSH!*

Katie, don't come out naked, okay?

I am a professionally underpaid lumber monkey.

HOLY FRIJOLES!

Are you ready? (x500,000)

I need to use the bathroom...
(said by one particular guy thirteen times... yes, we counted)

Save a tree... eat a cow.

* Restraints are good... they are happy things.

AAAAAAAAUUGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! (x1,000,000... roller coasters)

You're gonna die!

You have bubble things...

Barf schmarf...

* Hey guys! Guyyyyys!!! ...nevermind.

And we're like (nod) and he's like (nod)...

He's uh.... he's really nice.

Yeah, he thought it was some weird cult thing... having so many kids.

Okay, do you think he's gonna wanna know YOU, or 20 girls?

1-(reading) Restaurants are good...
*2- No, 'restraints!'

Guys are never that gross.

Put a freakin-nother car on the freakin ride!

I smell like the zombie.

What fun.

Shirt - Boys are stupid. Throw rocks at them.
Guy in our group - Girls are stupid. Throw a log on them.

Have you ever thought of getting liposuction... on your eyes?

I got the deluxe.... uh..... burger.

You look terrible...

Brian's in the bathroom for the 84th time...
(said by "Brian" himself)

1 - Dad, Skyler's a selfish brat.
Skyler - Yes I am.

You're just walkin around, let it go.

1 - I do have some pretty unusual bruises...
2 - From the abduction?

1 - Not everyone would jump in the toilet...
2 - You can't just jump in, you gotta' swim around a little.

I can't wash that finger, it picked Kevin Bacon's nose!

Just call me Quasi.

I wanna pick the guys nose!

As the mom, I say you're fine.
(The trip momma/chaperone)


And I still have Brian's pants...
(said by the trip momma... don't worry, no hanky panky, that's what makes this so funny)


I'm an animal!

Hey ladies!

But I might fall out!

Brian's a nut.

* Brian's hot. Mike's hot too.

Gotta have some meat on them bones, not just chicken legs.

What is that burning thing? Oh yeah, backdraft.

* 1 - Ow! Freezer burn!
2 - No, brain freeze!

Is you're finger alright? Are you experiencing any trauma?

We are responsible for making sure you have fun.
(The trip dad)

The truth hurts kid.

Wow Jacob, you really parked bad...

Gotta get some action...

He looks at his blind spot and all he sees is Aaron!

You wanna smell my armpit?

**************************

Hope you enjoyed my trip down memory lane.

Bugers and Backdrafts,

Page Traveler


P.S.
What fun trips have you been on? 
What silly things have you heard or said that are hilarious in and out of context?

Tuesday, October 18, 2011

Shift; by Jennifer Bradbury

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I picked this book up ONLY because the title was one I wanted to use for a book series I have in the pre-production stage... (like my mix of literary and movie terms there?) Luckily for me, the premise is completely different, and I feel okay about using it.

: : : SPOILER ALERT : : :

I read the first chapter on Thursday, and was a little turned off at first. The two main characters are a couple of young men: best friends, fresh out of high school, and their language slips from time to time. On Saturday evening I went back to it and immediately got sucked into the second chapter. I literally did not stop reading until I'd finished it at 2 in the morning.

Ask Turner.

The characters were so real, I truly felt for them in the journey they faced. They were funny - I laughed out loud a number of times, again, ask Turner - and totally relate-able. There wasn't really a "bad guy," though you think there might be....


Let's talk about the title for a bit... SHIFT in this book firstly refers to gears on a bike, but also a couple of other things. It is symbolic of the change we all go through as we grow from children to adults, and the change in who we need in our lives once that first change happens. Here were these two boys, going on a crazy "road trip" and through the course of it they changed. They became different people. They realized they each needed different things. At first this was difficult for them but in the end they accepted it and parted ways; still friends, still having all the old memories, but no longer in need of the other. In the end you're left with a feeling of joy swelling your heart.

The end tells me that no matter who you are, or what you do, or who your parents are, or your best friend, or what people think you ought to be - the only person you should be is you. And if you can't be the you that you want to be around those people, find a place where you can.

I hope that's not too ambiguous... Even though I've given away a bit of the ending, you really should read it. Like I said, there are some swear words (no f-bombs, but some milder ones are present. If this had been my copy I'd have just blacked them out), so if you don't like that, stay away from it. But if you can look past them, you'll see a beautiful story of a couple of kids finding themselves.


Bikes and Black Eyes,
(you'll have to read the book!)

Page Traveler


P.S.
When I graduated, I did some stage shows, and went on a mission. 
What did you do after high school to "find yourself?"

Monday, October 17, 2011

Love Me Letter 3

Welcome to "Love, Me" Monday!

To participate, just write a love note to someone, anyone, that you love. It could be a parent, sibling, partner, child, friend, or even someone you've never met. Then leave a link in the comments if you'd like to share it with us. 


Start off the week with love :-)


My letter today might sound weird to some, but it's something I've done in the past, and I thought I'd like to share it with you. Thanks for being here!


-PT

Dear Heavenly Father,

I know that usually begins a prayer - and I suppose you could consider this one - but really I'm just writing a letter that I know you'll see. It helps me sometimes to take away the ceremony of prayer (the thee's and thou's) and just talk. I hope you'll understand.

I've been feeling a little... unbalanced lately. Mostly I think because I have come to enjoy my writing so much. I now have about a 50,000 word novel that I'm relatively happy with. Besides that, I have read two good-sized books in the past week, staying up late into the night while Monkey's asleep to finish them. So basically, I set these goals and then didn't work on them enough at the beginning, and now it's crunch time. Could you help me with my discipline? I know I have time to do all the daily things, and still complete my goals by the end of the year, I just need to stop and take a breath every now and then.

Writing makes me so happy. Don't get me wrong, I love my husband and son more than anything. Being a family with them is what my life is about... but sometimes, I really feel like I could write all day! I love being able to create like that and just let my imagination go crazy! It feels so liberating. Thank you for drawing me to this. I don't know where it will take me, or what other blessings it might bring to my life, but for now, I am more content than I have ever been, because I have this outlet. I am free to imagine that I'm writing something that other people would like to read.

I am so grateful for the lessons I've learned these past few rough years. I am even more grateful that we are past the rough spots! I am grateful to know that you are watching out for us, and leading us to the things that will bring us blessings and joy. Knowing that you love us makes every day easier.

I'm sure I could go on forever, but I'll end there. Hope to hear from You soon... :-)

Love,

Me


P.S.
What would you say to God if you could write Him a letter?


P.P.S.
Remember to enter the GIVEAWAY!!!

Friday, October 14, 2011

Nightwalker: The Warlocks of Talverdin

I picked this book up off the library shelf because the synopsis sounded intriguing... and seriously, is that not a cool title? It sounds creepy, and magical, and all sorts of awesome...
{Which tells me I'd better have a DARN good synopsis AND rockin' title for any book I'm trying to sell...}

Title: Nightwalker: The Warlocks of Talverdin
Author: K.V. Johansen
Genre: YA Fantasy Fiction
Page count: 196

For such a short book, I was pleasantly surprised at how much was covered. The detail was great, and the time span was probably about nine months, not including flashback scenes of course, which reviewed necessary history. Not everything was explained, but not everything needed to be... for example: Johansen created new names for the months in this world. She didn't come out and say what all of them were, but when she needed one, she just used it. Same with the deities in the story. By the end I knew there were seven, but I didn't know who all of them were, and I was okay with that.


It was very simple, very straightforward, clean cut... It's funny, because there were little things I didn't think I liked while I was reading, but now I can't remember what they were. I feel like the crispness of the story overshadowed any little flaws. I found myself thinking, "Wow, I love the way that's worded..." I would try to think of a different way to say something, and resign myself to the fact that the way it's written is really the best, most concise way.

One thing I loved about this book, was that the author used a smart main character to teach lessons. I'm thinking of one part in particular where the main character is about to say something and chooses not to, telling the reader his reasons why rather than just saying, "he didn't speak." It was a brilliant way to put morals and decency into a story that I had never really thought about before. It makes me happy to know that my new-and-improved heroine is wiser than her first-draft counterpart, so I can definitely apply that technique, with her and with other educated characters.

If you like stories like Lord of the Rings but would prefer something shorter, or the Chronicles of Narnia but want something more grown-up, you will like this book. It moves quickly at certain points, and it does cover a lot in a short amount of time, but it's very enthralling. You'll get drawn in. I read it in less than a day, and I've already got the names of the kingdoms stuck in my head. It's amazing. I hope to be able to do that with my stories.

All in all, glad I picked it up. Here's hoping I can get two more books read and reviewed next week!


Shadows and Silhouettes,

Page Traveler


P.S.
What books have you read lately?


P.P.S.
If you haven't already, REMEMBER TO ENTER THE GIVEAWAY!

Thursday, October 13, 2011

Long Live Harry Potter

For those of you in any doubt, we are still avid Harry Potter fans.



We still make wands...



We still sell wands...


And I'm having a HP book discussion party for my birthday.



Just because all the books and movies are released, doesn't mean we can't still have a blast with the universe.


Booyah.


-Page Traveler


P.S. I say Tom's accent is the best. What do you think?

Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Risen; The Review

When I went to dinner with the Typelings on Saturday, Britney very graciously gifted me my very own copy of Risen. I started reading it that night and after hours of late-night suspense and creepification, finished it Tuesday (yesterday) at 10:15am.

First, I have to say... wow.

: : : MINOR SPOILER ALERT : : :

I will not give away any major plot points, but I will be talking about the characters a bit and their tendencies. If you don't want to hear it yet, get out of here and go order your own copy.



From a technical perspective, I could tell that this book was not professionally edited, as there were a few typo's here and there, (a misspelled word, or an accidentally capitalized letter, etc.) but for an avid reader like me, it didn't throw me off at all. In fact, it was almost refreshing to know that I'm not the only one who misses little things like that.

From a content perspective, I have to say that Britney has an amazing talent for description. I usually get turned off by too much description, but the pictures she painted for me were so beautiful, and described to concisely that I could see vividly what she wanted me to see. There were only a couple times in all 363 pages that I found myself looking for how long I had until the next dialogue, and that's saying something, because I do that all the time in EVERY book I read... even HP.

One of the things I really enjoyed about this novel is the characters and the way they interact. The main character, Sunny, is very honest, and real, which makes her relate-able. I find myself sympathizing with her and understanding the swings her emotions sometimes take. I also found myself physically reacting the way she was to certain things, you know, making the facial expressions, and saying her lines out loud the way I thought she would say them. Personally, I think I'd be a pretty good audiobook reader, now that I think about it...

Finn, the main supporting character, is charming, funny, and very attractive. {I think I may have a little bit of a fiction-crush on him, don't tell Turner} And for some reason, even though I knew he was American, I kept wanting to give him a British accent... hot fiction guys always have accents, right? Anyway...

The antagonist is an interesting character, and that's where I felt the most creepiness, almost to the point where I was afraid I would get nightmares. Also, I felt sorry for him at certain times, because he, too, is relate-able. But that only made it all the more frightening when he... well, I won't ruin it for you.

HA ha ha HA!


The one thing that made me the happiest though, was the ending. I'll tell you right now, it's a cliff-hanger. But Britney rounded it off so smoothly, ending it in the perfect place, so that I didn't feel jipped (sp). Of course there are unanswered questions, but that's why she's currently writing Book #2! Her ending gives me confidence that I can do the same with my book. Right now, my ending isn't an ending at all. It feels like it should just move on to another chapter. I have to work on it...

So if you haven't already, go enter the GIVEAWAY for your chance to win a free signed copy of Risen, along with other awesome prizes!


Scared Silly,

Page Traveler


P.S.
Have you read Risen? Are you planning to read it? Did this review change your plans?

Monday, October 10, 2011

Love Me Letter 2

Welcome to Love Me Monday!

The rule is, write a love note to someone you love or appreciate, and leave us a comment below with a link to your letter. We could all use a bit more love, gratitude and charity in our lives.

Thanks for playing!


Dear Typelings,

Oh. My. Gosh. 
I LOVE you guys! Thank you for hanging out with me, thank you for being so funny and smart, and for making me feel like I was a part of something amazing. 

you've been writing for so long, and I am still constantly amazed with the work you do. Your stories (those I have read) are engaging, entertaining, and well written. I adore you not only for your talents, but for your strength of character as well. Thank you for being such a support to me, and a great example as well. I hope that you and I can be friends for a very, very long time.

You crack me up. I am so glad you came to the HP party, because otherwise I may not have ever met you and my life would now lack the hilarity you have brought to it! I may envy you a little for your comedic timing. I think I've always wished I had your type of personality and talent just because, when you make people laugh, you make them feel comfortable. There's no awkwardness when you're genuinely laughing, and you make that happen.

I feel so privileged to have met you, and to be able to call you a friend! You are such a beautiful person, inside and out. I'm in chapter four of your book and I can already tell that your imagination is vivid and detailed! The pictures you paint are so precise, yet you do it without being too flowery or wordy. That is an amazing talent. Thank you for doing that interview with me, thank you for being so giving and selfless with your talent. You're amazing!


All in all, I feel so blessed to have been a part of something that feels almost historical. The three of you are so incredibly talented that I feel awed to even have contributed to such conversation as happened Friday. I can't wait to get together again, and read our work, comment, feedback, and enjoy each others company again. Thanks for being my friends, ladies. You've made me feel special, and it means a lot to me.

Love,

Me

Friday, October 7, 2011

The Ten Thousand Giveaway!

We're coming up on Ten Thousand pageviews!

(Scroll down to the VERY bottom of the blog, and you'll see a little counter.)

Also, remember that awesome gal we heard from in that interview last month? Yeah, the self-published author? Well, the Britney Jensen post was the most shared of ANY post on this blog, EVER! And it makes me so happy to announce that Risen is now available in paperback through Amazon.com!

(check out the Risen Website for details).

In honor of reaching ten thousand AND of the Risen book launch, we're having a...
GIVEAWAY!



The winner of the drawing will receive something in honor of each event:

1. A signed copy of Risen





Britney was kind enough to donate this to the cause, so help her out by spreading this post as FAR as you can! Make sure everyone you know enters to win!

Britney is awesome.

That is all.




2. A journal in which to record their "travels".



Because that's what we DO here at Page Traveler Tales.

Thank you all for being here, for following, traveling, liking, tweeting, plus-ing, whatever. Outside of my husband and son, you are my motivation, so thank you.






3. Just for kicks: a $10 itunes giftcard!



















Here are the rules:

1. LIKE Page Traveler Tales on FB HERE
If you already have, then share your favorite post on your FB page.
Leave a comment here saying you did so...

2. LIKE the Risen Facebook Page HERE
Again, if you already have, then share the website on your FB page.
Leave a comment here saying you did...

3. Share this post on Facebook by clicking on the Share box at the top or bottom of this post.
Leave a com... you get it...

4. Share this post on one (or more) other social networking site
(Twitter, Blog, G+, etc) and leave a comment with a link to where you did.

Each comment is one entry in the raffle.



There will only be one winner.........





Will it be you?




Thanks for following! Spread the word!

You have until midnight on Halloween to enter.... Ready? GO!

-Page Traveler

Thursday, October 6, 2011

Goooooooooaaaaaaaaal!!

First off, I'd like to make a disclaimer that I am not a competitive jerk.
I just think Despair.com is funny... and usually correct.
Source

So, Goals.

I set a goal to finish the first draft of my book by September 30th.

I did it.

I set a goal a few weeks ago to go running at least three times a week.

I've done that.

I set a goal in... March I think... to post something on this blog for at least a year.

So far, so good.



But I set a goal in January to read 30 books this year, and I've fallen seriously behind. I have to read twelve books in the next twelve weeks.

Luckily, I have an awesome friend who said, "Well that's easy. Just read a bunch of children's books."

I think she's brilliant. Children's books (classic children's books) are actually quite insightful. Take The Chronicles of Narnia, for example. Jack made all sorts of allusions to the story of Christ's atonement in The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe. And I love it. Remember that little book, The Wishing Tree that I told you about? It teaches kids to help where they can, trust where others wouldn't, and go on an adventure. This awesome friend of mine gave me a couple of suggestions, and I came up with a few of my own. Here are some...

Wind in the Willows
Winnie the Pooh
Encyclopedia Brown
Nancy Drew
The Babysitter's Club

Any other ideas? I'd appreciate all the help I can get. I'll also be throwing in a few short stories and poems from a literary anthology we have, so that'll round it out too.

What's your favorite classic children's book?


Goals and Good Reads,

Page Traveler

Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Writing Exercise #1

Get to Know Your Antagonist

I found this writing exercise on WritersDigest.com, and was really excited to try it.

It gives a list of ten things you can do to give more detail to your bad-guy. I won't list all of them here, but here are some of them...

1. Go through magazines (I used Google Images) until you find a picture of your antagonist. Post the picture above your computer (or if you have a laptop, somewhere you can see it regularly).

3. Write one or all of the following scenes in your antagonist's point of view, whether or not you plan to use his/her viewpoint in the story.
-love scene
-action scene (what I did)
-flashback scene from childhood



4. Choose a prop (piece of clothing, object, music, etc) that will allow you to slip into your antagonist's voice at will. When you write from your antagonist's POV, wear or use this prop.

5. Pretend you're your antagonist. Put a CD on and dance in your living room.

7. Create a Timeline for your antagonist's life. Fill it in in detail.

8. Just as an actor must get into his character, spend one day as much as you can in your antagonist's head, thinking his thoughts, holding his attitude, being with his feelings.


Okay.

In my book, I haven't written much about the bad guy, and as such, I can't write very much here, or it'll give stuff away. But I'll share with you a little of what I learned.

First off, one of these things my antagonist just plain would NOT do. Dance? No way.

Second, I'm sorry, but my antagonist is a creepy, unfeeling, evil man, and I do NOT want to spend a day in his head. (I imagine an author like Jo Rowling would feel the same.)

Now that I've got those out of the way, I'll show & tell you a little about my villain.

He is about 60 years old (or at least looks like it). He is tall and broad, with white hair and a receding hairline. No beard. His eyes are clear blue. His voice is normally soft and gentle. When he becomes angry, his eyes narrow, grow dark, and (I'm totally just making this up as I go, it might change) his smooth voice is even more frightening.

As I was going through pictures of people online, I found these...


Calming... soothing... just imagine him with white hair.

Nicolas Cage is the perfect representation of my bad guy. And to be honest, he's a great enough actor that he could totally pull it off... It'd be a hard role to play I think.


Hahaha! Annoyed some? I LOVE his look here! That's a look my antagonist would have behind people's backs... sneering at them in disgust as they think they know everything but really have no idea... he he he...


And of course, the anger, the hate, the disgust, it all comes out in this look. THIS is the epitome of my bad guy.

I wrote a scene from my antagonist's POV, which really helped me clarify who he is. I really want to also find a prop to help me write from his POV, create a timeline of his life, and write a scene from his childhood, maybe explaining why he is the way he is, you know?

This was really fun for me. If you're writing a book, I recommend doing this, not only for your antagonist, but for your hero as well. I tend to THINK I know my protagonist, but I'm not really sure I do, especially now that I'm re-writing and she's changing so much. It's definitely an interesting process, but I love it :-)

Thanks for traveling!


Sneers (you know, like cheers? Lol...),


Page Traveler


P.S. What do you think so far? Are you writing a book? Do you think it helps to get into your bad guy's brain when writing?

Monday, October 3, 2011

Love Me Letter 1

Today, I'm doing something different.

A new twist on an old tradition, Love Mom Monday is also, but not always, Love Me Monday. Today I'm writing a letter to someone who is not Monkey, and I'm definitely not their mom. So join with me in sharing the love you have for those around you... write a love note to someone, and start the week off right. Then comment here, and leave me a link to your letter (if you post it), because I'd love to hear all about the people you love! - PT

Yesterday was a very special day at the Page Household... Turner turned twenty-seven. My birthday of the same number isn't far off, but in honor of his special day, I wanted to take a moment and publicly write to him.


My Darling Turner,

Thank you for being so much for me. You are not only a loving husband, but an amazing father, a good friend, a strong priesthood holder, and a devoted servant of God. I have been so blessed to have you as my husband. You see through me in ways no one else ever could... or at least never said if they did. :-) You joke with me and tease me, which sometimes I don't like so much, but I want you to know I'd much rather have a husband who can laugh than one who can't or won't. Just thinking of you makes me smile. You work so hard at your job and at school to make a better life for us, and I am very grateful to you for every moment of it. We do miss you at home, but we know the reason, and that makes it all better.

This December will be four years that we've been married. Wow! I won't say that the "honeymoon is over" as some often do, but we have definitely had our feet firmly planted to the ground in the time we've had together. I only hope we can continue to let our hearts and heads be among the clouds; dreaming and looking forward to the good that is ours to claim. I love dreaming with you, knowing that whatever comes to us in this life will be ours to share together. Whatever trials come, we will face them as one. Whatever blessings we receive, we can rejoice in them for each other.
These years with you have been the best of my life. I have gained weight, lost weight, kept the house clean, let it be dirty, gotten dressed up, stayed in pajamas, changed, grown, and loved you through it all... and you've loved me. Forgive me for those rare times when my fear gets the better of me. I know that you love me, and I know you love Monkey. Over the next many years, I look forward to you and I growing even closer together than we are now.

Watching you this weekend has reminded me what an incredible man I married. You are charitable, kind, generous, forgiving, calm, happy and so many other amazing things. You mean so much more to me than you will ever know.

I am the luckiest woman in the world to have you as my husband, partner, companion, lover, friend, eternal companion.

Thank you, and happy birthday.

Love,

Me